Okay. First - dude, HELP your friend. Don't just stand there thinking, "our friendship is over. Hey, let me go over that lonely corner". Obviously, you guys can't be best friends if you just stand there looking at him. Second, how the heck can that ruin your relationship? You don't even KNOW that kid. Just give yer friend Sal over there some first aid. Done. Third, you should've said something. Honestly.
I'm pretty much glad that kid across the street punched him inside out. Well, I meant if that happened to Miranda. Maybe if this happened to me in reality, I'd be in shock. But it wouldn't necessarily damage my friend's relationship. Yeah, I won't actually go in front of this kid and be like, "little kid, don't do such violent things," or "dude, you're hurting my friend. Punch wars?" but there's no connection between the kid and me in the first place. Besides, a friend that judges you in any way - particularly, in your neighborhood, then that can't be a true friend. I feel as aggravated as ever thinking about this.
Who would you characterize your best friend as? Well, if you have any.
Cool blog post, dude! I have read this book before and I thought the exact same thing. I like how you connected the book to reality; it made me think about how weird it would seem if it actually occurred in real life. You put a lot of your opinions in this post and I seem to like it. But what if your friend just didn't care about anything except him (or her) being humiliated in front of everyone including you?
ReplyDeleteHi Corinnaaaaaaaaaa o3o
ReplyDeleteFor your revision, I think some things you could do are
-Add in more of your own thoughts...?
-Perhaps, write a little more about the book, or another topic as well?
-Maybe you can connect this more, like text-to-world/personal/text or something...?
-You sort of did, but maybe you could add more questions and stuff, to let the reader sorta think about it, ya know?
-Lastly. PLEASE MAKE THE FONT SIZE LARGER. IT HURTS MY HEAD AND EYES TO READ IT. GRACIAS o3o
Love and Rockets,
Reed